Rewrite copy for a skeptical reader

Removes claims that a wary buyer would bounce off.

Rewrite the copy below for a reader who is skeptical and short on time.

Do this:
- Replace every unsupported superlative with a specific, checkable claim.
- Move the strongest concrete proof into the first two sentences.
- Cut anything a competitor could say word-for-word about themselves.
- Keep it the same length or shorter.

Then list any claim that needs a number or source I haven't given you.

COPY:
[PASTE COPY]